I love you,
and I hate you too.

I love when you text,
but I hate when you
don't call me at all.
I love when we slowly
unite our hands.
I hate it when I gaze down
and I sadly recognize the spot
where your hand once was.

I love smelling my clothes-
your Polo cologne aroma still
penetrated in them. As your
delightful smell reaches my nose,
memories of colorful sunsets we
shared shoot directly to my mind.

I hate inhaling you
on my clothes because it's as if
I can touch your soft face.
I feel heartsick.

I love when your lips form
those three words
that make me tremble "I love you"

I hate when you leave
my side and abandon me
in a strange place where
nothing makes sense if you're not there.

I love you,
and I hate you too.

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Comment by Rosalita Gonzalez on February 8, 2010 at 7:37pm
Wow Alondra you must be crushed, wait are u still together with that dude???
Comment by Brenda Saucedo on January 14, 2010 at 4:11pm
This is so sweet!! I love and then hate someone too.
Comment by Alondra Perez on January 13, 2010 at 1:15pm
Im sorry but he doesn't go to Liberty Middle School and he's not on the ning either.
Comment by Manuel Garces Jr. on January 13, 2010 at 1:12pm
Or better yet, is he on the ning?
Comment by Manuel Garces Jr. on January 13, 2010 at 1:11pm
This line echoes this crazy little thing called love: " As your delightful smell reaches my nose,/
memories of colorful sunsets we shared shoot directly to my mind." Is he from Liberty Middle School?

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