Chihuahua Rememberance(Rough Draft #1)

[Araceli jimenez]

I will never forget you,
you annoying dog,you
were my friend.
I remember you from the day we picked you out,
to the day I spotted your stiff
unmoving body.

I will never forget the times I
hit you...It's just that you got annoying.
There's more to remember from you.
Dad running after you looking like the cartoon
"Tom and Jerry"

I will never forget your touch.The shiny black hair against
my hand.Even with your
smelly scent.(eww!)

I will never forget the moment
when i spotted you in your cage.
Thinking you're asleep.Chiquilin crying
and licking your face.My mother's sobs on the phone.
I will alwaysn remember you.

No other dog will ever replace you.

My princess ,I miss you.

[Yamilex Espitia]

Beautiful poem, Araceli. I feel that dog was always annoying. I love your poem!♥

[Jesus Escalante]

Looks like you really loved your dog, and you can show it perfectly in this great poem!

[Kiya Gray]

DID you dog die?

[Brandon Padron]

Wow araceli I can tell you really loved your dog.I can also tell that your dog was very special to you.I really liked the sentence that said "No other dog will ever replace you."
When I read that sentence it really touched me and i could tell that he meant so much to you.

[Joanna Mendez]

The love for a pet is always deep, and once you losse them you dont want to let go. I know you love and miss your dog. Bad memorys and all! You can feel the love you have for your dog in this poem.

[Manuel Garces Jr.]

My heart breaks deeper with every draft of your remembrance.

[Cassie Llanas]

You must of loved this dog, you show a lot of feelings for this practicular dog. It's like if she was your best friend, and nobody can ever replace her.

[Barry Lane]

I am sobbing for all the lost puppies,Araceli. Nice poem.