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Blue diamond
Yes my diamond
My blue diamond
How I love it so much
I like how it shines like the sun
It makes me feel so happy
But readers I’ll tell you one thing
This diamond is priceless
Yes my diamond
My precious blue diamond
I like it when it makes those sounds
Knock, knock, bang
It always feels smooth
Never so rough
Because I don’t want nothing to happen to
Its smooth blue surface
This is a part of me too
Yes my diamond
My beautiful blue diamond
My blue diamond
How I love it so much
I like how it shines like the sun
It makes me feel so happy
But readers I’ll tell you one thing
This diamond is priceless
Yes my diamond
My precious blue diamond
I like it when it makes those sounds
Knock, knock, bang
It always feels smooth
Never so rough
Because I don’t want nothing to happen to
Its smooth blue surface
This is a part of me too
Yes my diamond
My beautiful blue diamond
Comment
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Comment by Jessica Martinez on January 14, 2010 at 1:21pm -
What a real precious diamond ,I love the way the color shines out.Take care of it,if you really love it that much.
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Comment by Mandy Natalia Castillo on January 14, 2010 at 1:07pm -
I think your dedicating this poem to someone special,like your mom or that special girl you like<3. I absolutley like this poem:D! GREAT JOB!
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