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Spoil me (Draft#1)
Spoil me with love and care,
unconditional my respect is for you,
you give me all that you are
never ending love
spoil me with comfort and concern
I am bound to rebel against your rules,
still you attend to my need's
you raise my standers
spoil me with punishment and sympathy,
vanish my privileges
feel for me when my hearts broken
spoil me with attention and warm hugs,
I love you till the end
you straighten my crooked smile
I'll spoil you with love and care,
not because you were there
simply because you care.Views: 2
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Comment by Luis Alberto Paternina Andrade on February 13, 2010 at 1:31pm -
"Spoil me" when I read that I was thinking Spoil me with like stuff . Now that I read it I think is an great poem.
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