Journey To Her Heart.

[Erickkkk]

Lips dry,
Head up,
I can make it.

Arms empty,
eyes glaring down,
I can make it.

Empty space by my side,
tears fall like weights,
I can make it.

Heart tears in two,
Mind loses sanity,
I can make it.

Souless body,
loneliness continues,
I failed.

[Rosalita Gonzalez]

You never gave up, and thats what counts.

[Eduardo Favata Jr.]

I like how you never gave up. That you had the will power to keep going.

[Teresa Rakay]

I lik how you just kept going and going. Nice.

[Juan Araguz]

The peom was nice i like how you never gave up it just shows that your a strong person

[Manuel Garces Jr.]

Who do you think you are, Erick? Alan Sitomer? Your third poem already? I appreciate the twist in your concluding stanza. Nice.