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Martiza's Christmas Committie (daft #2)

4:00pm- Im only out of school, and your already trying to make me hep you Im tired from scool. I just want to relax.



4:03- "Come on dad wants those trees outside beautfull and he wants us to do it!" she says trying to get me to go, but im stubbern. Takes much more effort then that to make me do something I dont want to do.



4:15- Arguing is a lost cause. I give into you put on jacket and walk outside into the cold.



4:30- I sit on the driveway like you said and… Continue

Added by Joanna Mendez on January 28, 2010 at 12:05pm — No Comments

Book Review: The Lovely Bones (Draft #1)

The Lovely Bones Little Brown and company,2002,328pp

Alice Sebold ISBN 9780316168816



"My name was Salmon, like the fish;first name Susie. I was fourteen when I was murdered on December 6,1973."



What would you do if your life was takin away from you right when it was starting? If all you could do was watch fom above in your own personal heven, but you couldn't influene anything down on earth? Thats how it is for Susie Salmon, only fourteen when she was murdered by a… Continue

Added by Joanna Mendez on January 21, 2010 at 12:10pm — 6 Comments

Martiza's christmas comittiee (Draft#1)

4:00pm- I'm only out of school and she's already trying to make me help her. Im tired I just want to

realax.



4:15pm- Arguing is a lost cause, I give into you, oull on a jacket and walk outside into the cold



4:30pm- I sit on the driveway daing as you said and untangle the lights



4:45pm- My first year on the christmas committie. I think i hate it!



4:55pm- You tell me to string the lights. i do and you criticize. I'm annoyed.



5:00pm- You… Continue

Added by Joanna Mendez on January 13, 2010 at 12:00pm — 1 Comment

Book Review "Shadowmaker" draft #1

Shadowmaker Bantam Double Dell, 197pg, $9,16

Joan Lowery nixon ISBN: o-440-21942-6





"It's only a letter," mom finally said, and before i could stop her she broke away from me and picked it up, slipping a single sheet of papper from the open envolope. "Short and to the point," she said and read aloud, "Get out ok kluney befor its to late!"



Kate Gillian and her mom moved to Kluney, a small texas town, they think they would have a peaceful six-month stay, but they… Continue

Added by Joanna Mendez on January 11, 2010 at 12:06pm — 2 Comments

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