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Where I'm From

I am from



practicing on grassy football fields to baseball games on hard rock fields,



enjoying video games to playing outside in the fresh air



listening to soothing classic music to hearing heavy metal rock



having pleasant afternoons with my friends to going to church to pray



cherishing old memories to starting new ones



working out in the…

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Added by Marky Benavidez on February 12, 2010 at 1:00pm — No Comments

Someone elses Point of View (Rough Draft #1)

To many people they see me as a caring young little boy. But to most of the people that know me I am a brat who needs to learn how to behave and be taught a lesson. My mom loves me no matter how I act or behave.But come on lets get real every mom loves they're kids or at least most of them. Why some people see me as an adorable kid is because I would help people out and open the door for them. Also one of the reasons why people say I have no manners is because I like to bother and interrupt… Continue

Added by Marky Benavidez on February 4, 2010 at 12:30pm — No Comments

Deserved Thank You (Draft #5)

Thank You...



for always scouting over me so I wouldn't get into trouble,



for always cheering me on in my baseball games,



for always busting your butt off

( so we could have a roof over our heads, running water, and food so we wouldn't go hungry,)



for always letting my friends come over even though I misbehaved,



for always buying me gaming consoles even when I don't deserve them,



for always letting me work around the house…

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Added by Marky Benavidez on January 25, 2010 at 11:30pm — No Comments

(Diary of a Wimpy Kid Draft #2)

Diary of a Wimpy Kid

Jeff Kinney

Amulet Books for Young Readers, 2007, 224pp., $12.95

ISBN 978-0-8109-9313-6





Diary of a Wimpy Kid is the most far-out best selling book of the year.I love this book because of the characters in the book always getting into some embarrassing situations.For example when there star goalie gets hurt, Greg Heffly has to go in and fill in the position for his teammate.Well it doesn't turn out so good for Greg because he got distracted with the… Continue

Added by Marky Benavidez on January 20, 2010 at 1:00pm — 4 Comments

Diary of a Wimpy Kid (Roug Draft #1)

Diary of Wimpy Kid is such a phenomenal book.If u like reading about crazy things and a character named Greg Heffely (who does so many crazy things ),this book is so right for you.It is so hysterical,for example,when Greg and his best friend Rowely taunt these teenagers on Halloween night by making allot of crazy faces at them.So the teenagers take off in they're car and started chasing them through the alley,but luckily Greg's grandma lived close by so they went to her house and hid there for… Continue

Added by Marky Benavidez on January 14, 2010 at 1:00pm — No Comments

Desered Thank You Rough Draft #3

Thank You





For always looking after me so I wouldn't get in trouble



For always cheering me on at my baseball games



For always busting your butt off so u could put a roof over our head,have water,and give s electricity



For always letting my friends come over when I do something bad or don't even ask



For always buying me games and appliances when I don't deserve them



Thank You





For always letting me work around… Continue

Added by Marky Benavidez on January 13, 2010 at 1:00pm — 2 Comments

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