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Barry Lane commented on Elizabeth Barrientes's blog post These thought's cut deeper than any blade. Draft #1"Great description of how pain can stay with us for a long time. You write with great passion, Elizabeth."
Gladys Flores commented on Elizabeth Barrientes's blog post These thought's cut deeper than any blade. Draft #1"Wow elizabeth I never knew you were so deep and emotional.Nice job"
Lorenzo Garcia commented on Elizabeth Barrientes's blog post These thought's cut deeper than any blade. Draft #1"I know how you feel well in my case it happend to me with my grandpa.I wrote about this in my blog if you want you can check it out."
Manuel Garces Jr. commented on Elizabeth Barrientes's blog post These thought's cut deeper than any blade. Draft #1"The pain g(listens). Think about it."
Elizabeth Barrientes commented on Rosalita Gonzalez's blog post Why did you leave me?"That deep affection toward's the person,is heart warming yet slightly painful to the heart.I think I could understand your feeling's more now.Good job!"
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Book Review: Tonya Hurley's Ghostgirl (Draft #1)
"This year is different.This is my year."
Charlotte Usher is pobably the girl you know as the seat filler or someone taking up space.But to Scarket,she's just a ghost roaming around,searching a way to enter the Fall Ball with Damen Dylan,which is lead to an risky excersism and a battle for whom to choose.
Which will Damen choose will it be Scarlet or Charlotte?
Where would this death road take charlotte and who are the strange couple waiting for her in her new… Continue
Charlotte Usher is pobably the girl you know as the seat filler or someone taking up space.But to Scarket,she's just a ghost roaming around,searching a way to enter the Fall Ball with Damen Dylan,which is lead to an risky excersism and a battle for whom to choose.
Which will Damen choose will it be Scarlet or Charlotte?
Where would this death road take charlotte and who are the strange couple waiting for her in her new… Continue
Posted on January 20, 2010 at 12:34pm
These thought's cut deeper than any blade. Draft #1
As I sit here thinking of you.
Your love,your betrayel.
My mind is spinning,
while my heart is racing.
Everything is dark,all I
can see is the bright red
blood glistening as I
slowly sink in the blade.
The sharp pain doesn't last long,
but the wound you embeded
in me won't stop as it get's
deeper and deeper.
What did I do to
deserve such pain?
Your love,your betrayel.
My mind is spinning,
while my heart is racing.
Everything is dark,all I
can see is the bright red
blood glistening as I
slowly sink in the blade.
The sharp pain doesn't last long,
but the wound you embeded
in me won't stop as it get's
deeper and deeper.
What did I do to
deserve such pain?
Posted on January 12, 2010 at 8:17pm — 4 Comments
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- At 10:54am on March 2, 2010, Manuel Garces Jr. said…
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Here is a place to post your Wacky We-search Reports. Post each report as a new discussion, or if you are a teacher you can post similar reports in the same blog ie: Drug Ads etc.. Can't wait to see all the examples.See More
Laurie Block Spigel replied to Barry Lane's discussion Poetry Ideas for April"I have lots of poetry and bookmaking ideas on my website, and also some poems written by me and my students. In April 2013 I published an article title Seven Poetry Games. You will find something for all ages there. …"
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