"I think of Shakespeare's play Othello when I read your poem. "who uses my own lover to be an enemy in my eyes." Jealousy is lust's sister."
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Alyssa Marie Ayala
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Barry Lane commented on Alyssa Marie Ayala's blog post Lust (L1)"Alyssa,
Your poem has some really strong imagery. I see lust as envy and a host of other things that "meander our mind." There is wisdom in your words!"
Alyssa Marie Ayala posted a blog postLust (L1)
Lust is defined as a need to claim thorns and shove them in our skinMaking us no different but self-harming our lives.Lust isn’t just labeled as a sexual temptation but the greed and glutton waysComing, from all over us, as needles in our minds.Lust doesn’t happen inside clubs, proms, or desires from our heartsBut from the flesh that craves insanity thought our time.Lust is a spirit roaming through a street with choking handsTaking the breath from people by our side.Lust is a virulent chain…See More
Alyssa Marie Ayala posted a blog postPromise (Script)
PROMISE(KAT,ALEXIS, and ROBERT are camping out in the forest, dirty, and tired. ALEXIS fell asleep, while KAT and ROBERT are still fully awake, however restless)KAT(sighs) That was kindergarten. I was young, childish, and stupid to make a promise like that to you.ROBERTI didn’t and still don’t find it stupid at all. I think about it now and it just seems something like any cute girl would do… Was I the only guy you ever liked in Elementary?KATNot the only one, or my first, but I admit that I…See More
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FunSize Stories!
This is where you can type your short stories! Type whatever you want! It can be a Comedy, Drama , Action , Romance , a Personal Essay, ANYTHING! You type it and we comment :D
Barry Lane left a comment for Alyssa Marie Ayala"So great to meet you 2 Alyssa. I have been reading your writing for year now and you are even better in person. I so enjoyed our day together. I will remember it always. I think the teachers there were really…"
Alyssa Marie Ayala's Groups
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twilight etc.. chit chat
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The Manga Group
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Music with Meanings
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CCS:Cheat Codes Society
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TOP SECRET
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BEST BANDS
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Fables for Life
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All Gamers United
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Mutual Admiration Society
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FunSize Stories!
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Live Poet's Society
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- How would you describe your work?
- MY work can be creative.serious,common to the real life....mostly about my life or fiction sometimes. Whatever comes to mine i will note it on my binder and will come up with ideas through the day.Usaully it's ♥ romance♥ cause i am a big fan of that!
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Edit 11/11/2012
HAHAHA. Omgosh. I really did change.
Pffft. I hate romance *cough* sorta;
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Lust (L1)
Lust is defined as a need to claim thorns and shove them in our skin
Making us no different but self-harming our lives.
Lust isn’t just labeled as a sexual temptation but the greed and glutton ways
Coming, from all over us, as needles in our minds.
Lust doesn’t happen inside clubs, proms, or desires from our hearts
But from the flesh that craves insanity thought our time.
Lust is a spirit roaming through a street with choking…
ContinuePosted on February 22, 2013 at 1:34am — 2 Comments
Promise (Script)
PROMISE
(KAT,ALEXIS, and ROBERT are camping out in the forest, dirty, and tired. ALEXIS fell asleep, while KAT and ROBERT are still fully awake, however restless)
KAT
(sighs) That was kindergarten. I was young, childish, and stupid to make a promise like that to you.
ROBERT
I didn’t and still don’t find it stupid at all. I think about it now and it just seems something like any cute girl would do… Was I the only…
Posted on November 11, 2012 at 3:56am
Comment Wall (12 comments)
- At 9:55am on November 29, 2011,
Barry Lane said… Your poems are full of passion. I love them.
- At 8:40pm on December 11, 2010, Barry Lane said…
So great to meet you 2 Alyssa. I have been reading your writing for year now and you are even better in person. I so enjoyed our day together. I will remember it always. I think the teachers there were really impressed by all your classmates too. You ROCK!
- At 11:45pm on August 10, 2010,
Alma said… - thank u!
- At 8:43pm on August 8, 2010, Alma said…
- i'm still waiting...=/
- At 8:31pm on May 9, 2010, Alma said…
- it's not that i'm good at poems it's that it describes how i feel about life and my friends that i love....so i will keep at it wit my blog because they really do mean something....i love writing and i love how i describe it!!!!!! so thank you hope u keep looking at my blog!!!!!!
- At 10:38am on April 13, 2010, linda marie trevino gave Alyssa Marie Ayala a gift…
- At 8:09pm on December 02, 2009, Alyssa Marie Ayala added a gift to their profile…
- At 1:26am on November 11, 2009, Barry Lane said…
- Hey Alyssa,
I am so glad you found my Ning. You bring so much life and joy. I am just so happy you are here. Love Taylor Swift song too. You will change the world with your art someday. Keep the channel open. Share your light!
Thanks for your kind words about the Ning. You and your friends add so much.
Barry
- At 8:08am on October 21, 2009, Alyssa Marie Ayala added a gift to their profile…
- At 12:49am on October 18, 2009,
Juan Espinoza said… - welcome
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Barry Lane left a comment for Nancy J. Baylor"Better yet pass on my info to your cc in the district. Maybe i can present for your school or district this summer!!!! Here is a link to the workshop description.
http://www.discover-writing.com/register.html"
Barry Lane left a comment for Nancy J. Baylor"Nancy,
You can come to any of our fall conferences as my special guest. District be damned. Take a personal day!!!
Barry"
Billie Walker might attend Barry Lane's event
Turn Rigor to Vigor : Creating All STAAR Readers and Writers with Barry Lane and Alana Morris at Mcallen, Texas Embassy Suites 956-685-3000
June 18, 2013 at 8:30am to June 19, 2013 at 3pm
A New workshop that turns rigor to vigor Creating ALL STAAR Writers and Readers : Success at STAAR through Engaging Teaching of Expository Writing and Non-Fiction ReadingTeaching reading and writing should be a joyful dynamic interactive process, not a bore. Alana Morris and I will show you the best practices in reading and writing that will help your students excel on the STAAR test without the drill and kill approaches that make students groan. Join us for two idea-packed days of classroom…See More
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Deepening our Understanding of the Reading - Writing Workshop A Literacy Institute for Teachers (K-5) with Barry Lane
Here is a place to share writing, video, photos, theme songs from our 4 day workshop in Florence, South Carolina.
Billie Walker joined Barry Lane's group
Handouts in the Cloud
Here you will find many great handouts on writing from Barry Lane , Gretchen Bernabei and others. Just download and start using them.See More
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Poems , Poems and More Poems
Love Poems,Depresing Poems, Funny Poems,Special Occasion Poems,Any Type of Poems ........See More
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Creating All STAAR Writers
Here is a place to share ideas that transform students into lifelong writers and help them succeed on any writing test, including STAAR. Download lessons from Barry Lane, Gretchen Bernabei and Alana Morris to add to your tool box. See More
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